The Bright Furious Sun.
As the bright sun awakens from its slumber
you can see its bright light spread through the city like a tsunami
the sun comes up and up and up like a rocket
as the shining sun burns the city all day long
you can hear fire from the sun
as you get burnt to a crisp people buy Popsicles to cool themselves down but the sun grew even worse
the temperature get hotter than ever melting the cold Popsicles
as the sun goes down everything cools down
The temperature
the Popsicles
Everything
the sun rises again for another hot glowing day.
Kaden 2020
Here is my poem it is about summer it is a good poem I made enjoy
Its is all about summer because of the sun I was gonna call it summer but then I thought it was a very plain title so I called it The Bright Furious sun.
ReplyDeleteHi Kaden,
ReplyDeleteI love all the figurative language you used, my favorite part is when every thing cools down. Maybe you could tell us why you made the poem.